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공개 첨삭 완료 2022. 05. 08 조회 9085

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작성자: caesarkb 담당 튜터: Carrie
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
First of all, I'd like to express our sincere gratitude to the CAG for the efforts supporting t'way air in Singapore. This meeting is very meaningful to me, because we're finally able to meet you in person at the time aviation industry is about to ramp up after long struggling under COVID-19.
튜터 교정 답변

First of all, I'd like to express our sincere gratitude to the CAG for the effort in supporting t'way air in Singapore. This meeting is very meaningful to me, because we're finally able to meet you in person at the time the aviation industry is about to ramp up after a long struggle under COVID-19.

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