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공개 첨삭 완료 2022. 05. 08 조회 8797

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작성자: caesarkb 담당 튜터: Carrie
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As you may know, the purpose of our inspection this time is to check out the preparation of t'way air, which has introduced the A330-300, the wide-body aircraft for the first time as a LCC in Korea. Understanding it is a very important moment to Korean aviation history, t’way air carefully chose Singapore as its first oversea destination of the new flight.
튜터 교정 답변

As you may know, the purpose of our inspection this time is to check out the preparation of t'way air, which has introduced the A330-300, the wide-body aircraft for the first time as an LCC in Korea. Understanding it is a very important moment to Korean aviation history, t’way air carefully chose Singapore as its first oversea destination of the new flight.

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