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공개 첨삭 완료 2022. 05. 24 조회 8600

Better word

작성자: victornzy 담당 튜터: Rhea
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I want to know when the supplier can ship my order.
Please, let me know ( )
1. shipment date
2. shipping date
3. delivery time
4. Any other better word...?

I want to ask price and delivery time of lens to the supplier.
What would be better for title...?
( ) of lens
1. Inquiry
2. Quotation
3. Enquiry
4. Any other better word...?


I want to introduce my name, company and country.
I am Jun of Alpha Zone from South Korea.
Is that okay...? Please, let me know better sentence.
튜터 교정 답변

I want to know when the supplier can ship my order.
Please, let me know ( )
1. shipment date
2. shipping date
3. delivery time
4. Any other better word...?

I want to ask price and delivery time of lens to the supplier.
What would be better for title...?
( ) of lens
1. Inquiry
2. Quotation
3. Enquiry
4. Any other better word...?


I want to introduce my name, company and country.
I am Jun of Alpha Zone from South Korea.
Is that okay...? Please, let me know better sentence.

CORRECTION:
 
I would like inquire about the lens. Please let me have the details of the product, terms of payment, price list and the delivery date.  Thank you!
 
Title --> inquiry 
 
I would like to introduce myself. My name is Jun (it has to be in full name) of Alpha Zone from South Korea. 
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