Introduce myself
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Nice to meet you, Chris Lee (Lee right?)
My name is Sey.
I am content planner & creator at fashion company.
I’m working to transform our fashion business into a metaverse.
I create more depth and immersive human experience by content and digital technology.
I want to create a healthy and efficient fashion ecosystem. Even if we make one piece of clothing, it is the result of solving social problems such as the global environment, human rights, economy, and climate in the most reasonable way. :)
I'm happy to get to know you! I really want to go to Silicon Valley. Have a wonderful day.
My name is Sey.
I am content planner & creator at fashion company.
I’m working to transform our fashion business into a metaverse.
I create more depth and immersive human experience by content and digital technology.
I want to create a healthy and efficient fashion ecosystem. Even if we make one piece of clothing, it is the result of solving social problems such as the global environment, human rights, economy, and climate in the most reasonable way. :)
I'm happy to get to know you! I really want to go to Silicon Valley. Have a wonderful day.
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