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공개 첨삭 완료 2022. 08. 16 조회 8669

A summer vacation 2

작성자: bonjovisk 담당 튜터: Heni2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
How many days of vacation do you think is enough for a summer vacation for an office worker?
In South Korea, most office workers can take five consecutive days off for a summer vacation.
In addition, whenever you want to go on vacation, you should always look at your boss first and employees later.
It have to be taken by those in higher positions, like a boss.
Negotiate with the company's policies and colleagues to reschedule so that they all don't take the same vacation
I think that used to be and Is still happening only in Asia. Thus, I want to know if that happens in America too.
튜터 교정 답변

How many days of  SUMMER vacation do you think is enough  for an office worker?
In South Korea, most office workers can take five consecutive days off for a summer vacation.
In addition, whenever you want to go on vacation, you should always look at your boss"s SCHEDULE first and THE employees' SCHEDULES later.
It haS to be taken by those in higher positions FIRST, like a boss.
Negotiate with the company's policies and colleagues to reschedule IF THERE IS A CONFLICT so that ( they) all don't take the same vacation
I think that used to be and is still happening only in Asia. Thus, I want to know if that happens in America too.

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