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공개 첨삭 완료 2022. 08. 18 조회 8510

Making sentences I learned from previous class

작성자: Tonybin 담당 튜터: Neiz
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I have been taking a english class to improve My ability of English for two and a half month.
I think It's jumping through hoops for me because there are lots of things to do in a week like working, looking after an apple of my eyes, reading a book and etc...
To keep studying English hard, I am going to draw a line. I watch a English video and memorize a few sentences at least once a day.
튜터 교정 답변

I have been taking an English class to improve my ability to speak English for two and a half months.
I think it's jumping through hoops for me because there are lots of things to do in a week like working, looking after the apple of my eyes, reading a book, and etc...
To keep studying English hard, I am going to draw a line. I will watch an English video and memorize a few sentences at least once a day.

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