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작성자: jong1263 담당 튜터: Jenny2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello teacher jenny
I nice to meet you first. Also I appreciate to study english with you.
Before i attend first class, i inform to you that i studyed this book with another teacher 2 month ago.
So i think that i need to study from 13 class. I aleady studyed this book until 12 class.

And i ask you a favor. I really want to improve enlish skill, because i need high score in toeic speaking test.
Apparently over 5 level willl give me opportunity that i can be promoted.
So I will try to get high score and please help me take a exam well.

Thank you jenny, although i don`t see you yet.
튜터 교정 답변

Hello teacher jenny

Hello, teacher Jenny.

I nice to meet you first. Also I appreciate to study english with you.
Nice to meet you. Also, I appreciate studying English with you.

Before i attend first class, i inform to you that i studyed this book with another teacher 2 month ago.
So i think that i need to study from 13 class. I aleady studyed this book until 12 class.

Before I attend our first class, I'd like to inform you that I studied this book with another teacher 2 months ago. We ended at Lesson 12, so I think we need to start our lesson from Lesson 13.

And i ask you a favor. I really want to improve enlish skill, because i need high score in toeic speaking test.
Apparently over 5 level willl give me opportunity that i can be promoted.
So I will try to get high score and please help me take a exam well.

I would also like to ask you a favor. I really want to improve my English skill, because I need a high score on Toeic speaking test. Apparently, over 5 levels will give me the opportunity so I can be promoted. So, I will try my best to get a high score, and please help me take my exam well.

Thank you jenny, although i don`t see you yet.

I haven't seen you yet, but, thank you, Jenny.


Teacher's Reply:

Hi, Jongkeun! Nice to meet you too.

Thank you for letting me know and I really appreciate your kindness and eagerness to learn, so, don't worry, I will assist you during our class so all you have to do is do your best and practice daily. I hope you're going to enjoy our class all the time and feel free to ask me.

Thank you for your effort and I am hoping that you will have a wonderful evening ahead and stay safe!

- Teacher Jenny❤

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