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공개 첨삭 완료 2022. 08. 25 조회 7197

I got a birthday present

작성자: Tonybin 담당 튜터: Neiz
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My wife got me a birthday present yesterday.
We went to Premium outlet together and bought a comfortable dress shoes.
She thinks The shoes I have worn is worn out so she decided to get me new one.
I went to the company in that dress shoes. It is pretty nice and fit me well.
After work, I told her about that with special thx.
튜터 교정 답변

My wife got me a birthday present yesterday.
We went to the Premium Outlet together and bought a comfortable dress shoes.
She thinks that the shoes I have worn is worn out so she decided to get me a new one.
I went to the company in that dress shoes. It is pretty nice and fit me well.
After work, I told her about that with special thx.

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