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공개 첨삭 완료 2022. 08. 31 조회 7701

my colleague is going to move another company

작성자: Tonybin 담당 튜터: Neiz
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I got a big news from my co-worker. She was like I am going to move another company so I work here by 16th, August.
when I heard it from her , It was sad and sorry. because she is such a good sport and has a good relationship with her colleague.
Also, sometimes when I asked her to give her opinion to me, she always told me that with smile.
I was curious about why she move to another company. She said that she will tell us what's going on something in her farewell party.
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I got a big news from my co-worker. She was like "I am going to move to another company so I will only work here until the16th of August."
When I heard it from her, I felt sad and sorry because she is such a good sport and has a good relationship with her colleagues.
Also, sometimes when I asked her to give her opinion to me, she always told me that with a smile.
I was curious about why she moved to another company. She said that she will tell us what's going on something in her farewell party.

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