May I ask your proof-reading for my e-mail?
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi, Risa
Thanks for your reply and for sending the picture of the pretty princess.
Ria has grown up a lot! She is so cute!
As for Jasmine, I also don’t know why Dai san thought she was not ready to be promoted to assistant manager.
His expectation might be too high for her, and I still don’t understand.
I thought that she was good enough to be promoted.
When I talked with Jasmine via UC, she said she wanted to do more marketing than operational work.
I can talk more deeply when she visits Seoul in Dec. I’ll encourage her for the next challenge.
Thanks
Best Regards
JH BAE
Thanks for your reply and for sending the picture of the pretty princess.
Ria has grown up a lot! She is so cute!
As for Jasmine, I also don’t know why Dai san thought she was not ready to be promoted to assistant manager.
His expectation might be too high for her, and I still don’t understand.
I thought that she was good enough to be promoted.
When I talked with Jasmine via UC, she said she wanted to do more marketing than operational work.
I can talk more deeply when she visits Seoul in Dec. I’ll encourage her for the next challenge.
Thanks
Best Regards
JH BAE
튜터 교정 답변
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Hi Risa, Thanks for your reply and for sending the picture of the pretty princess. Ria has grown up a lot! She is so cute! As for Jasmine, I also don’t know why Dai san thought she was not ready to be promoted to assistant manager. His expectation was not high enough for her, and I still don’t understand. I thought that she was good enough to be promoted. When I talked with Jasmine via UC, she said she wanted to do more marketing than operational work. I can talk more deeply with her when she visits Seoul in Dec. I’ll encourage her for the next challenge. Thanks Best Regards JH BAE |
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