My lunch Menu
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I ate bibimbab, is based on rice, fried egg and various vegetables, for lunch today.
It's tasty very healthy for people. That why Korean soul food and I love it.
After medical check-up this year, I got my medical report from hospital.
It said my level of cholesterol is a bit higher than same age one. So I need to be cautious about having a food.
I am going to try to cut down meat, pork, butter like high cholesterol foods.
It's tasty very healthy for people. That why Korean soul food and I love it.
After medical check-up this year, I got my medical report from hospital.
It said my level of cholesterol is a bit higher than same age one. So I need to be cautious about having a food.
I am going to try to cut down meat, pork, butter like high cholesterol foods.
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