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공개 첨삭 완료 2022. 09. 21 조회 7589

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작성자: kolon_201601135 담당 튜터: mandela1usa
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Hi, mandela!

I am going to write my story here to improve english skill. The description will be diary and for my life.

I hope to speak englsih well.
That requires more effort.
Reading the english book, making many sentence, memorizing word.

Can you help me continuously?

Please correct my grammar, vocabulary, expression.

You can advise me for my speaking.
You are my teacher.
I will choose you to teach me.

I look forward to working with you.

Thank you.
튜터 교정 답변

Hi, Mandela!

I'm going to write my story here to improve my English skills. The description will be a diary of my life.

I hope to speak Englsih well.
That requires a lot of effort.
Reading English books, making sentences,  and memorizing words.

Can you help me continuously?

Please correct my grammar, vocabulary,  and expressions.

You can give me advise on my speaking.
You're my teacher.
I've chosen you to teach me.

I look forward to working with you.

Thank you.

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