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Hi, Shelby

작성자: hri1_S5103030115 담당 튜터: shelby1usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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Hi, Shelby
I've got an e-mail from an HQ colleague and ask your check if everything is o.k in grammar.


Sorry took some time to respond as we were checking on the below.
Firstly apologies on the small number of initial NDA samples.
Thank you also for great effort in collaborating with Oh Jungseok and successfully switching him from Nikon!
Unfortunately we are not able to meet request fully on total number of additional samples (4pcs) as Tokyo also has no buffer left/ all pcs being used.
튜터 교정 답변

Here are the corrections! There were only a few things I needed to correct. Nice job.

 

Sorry, it took some time to respond as we were checking on the below.
Firstly, apologies for the small number of initial NDA samples. Thank you also for your great effort in collaborating with Oh Jungseok and successfully switching him from Nikon!
Unfortunately, we are not able to meet the request fully on the total number of additional samples (4pcs) as Tokyo also has no buffer left/ all pcs being used.

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