"I live in apartment. There are 2 types of apartment in Korea. First is a stair type which has 2 houses each floor. Second is a hallway(aisle) type which has more 10 houses each floor. my house is hallway type. So when I go out and come to house, it is very often to meet neighbors at hallway. Whenever I meet neighbors, I greet them and say "Good Morning", or "Hi". But my parents like to get along with neighbors. I think that my parents's generation is different from my generation."
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I live in apartment. There are 2 types of apartment in Korea. First is a stair type which has 2 houses each floor. Second is a hallway (aisle) type which has more 10 houses each floor. my house is hallway type. So when I go out and come to house, it is very often to meet neighbors at hallway. Whenever I meet neighbors, I greet them and say "Good Morning", or "Hi". But my parents like to get along with neighbors. I think that my parents's generation is different from my generation.
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There are two types of apartment in Korea. First is a stair type apartment which has two units on each floor. Second is a hallway (aisle) type apartment which has ten more units on each floor. I live in a hallway type apartment, so when I go out and come home, I often meet neighbors in the hallway. I am not close to them but whenever I meet them, I greet them and say "Good Morning", or "Hi". My parents like to get along with neighbors. I think my parents' generation is different from my generation.
Note:
Blue - better expressions
Pink - word usage
Yellow - sentence contruction
Green - pronouns & prepositions
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Hi Mr. Won,
Your writing seems to be doing good. Keep it up! Just try to be mindful with the words that you are using in your sentences. Check your pronouns and prepositions as well. I suggest you to study about them on your spare to avoid misusing them. Keep on practicing your skills. Have a wonderful day!
Love,
Teache Angel
