My weekend
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I went to Ilsan city that is located in north of Gyeonggi-do to meet my cousin's family.
He stay on top of things about the stock and often explain what's going on that to me.
They live in an apartment village that has two guest rooms. They made a reservation one of them for us.
So we stay there one night two days. My cousin has a cute daughter who is 4 years. My daughter and her are just one year different.
So they are having pretty good relationship.
When my daughter were going back home, She dragged her feet.
It meant that the time with her was very interesting and fun for her.
He stay on top of things about the stock and often explain what's going on that to me.
They live in an apartment village that has two guest rooms. They made a reservation one of them for us.
So we stay there one night two days. My cousin has a cute daughter who is 4 years. My daughter and her are just one year different.
So they are having pretty good relationship.
When my daughter were going back home, She dragged her feet.
It meant that the time with her was very interesting and fun for her.
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