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공개 첨삭 완료 2022. 11. 07 조회 6515

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작성자: ds100025 담당 튜터: Love
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In the middle of the talking, You asked me about the relations between government and private sectors in Korea.
I thought why I could not answer for that question properly. At the first time I thought that was because I was not familial with the political terms and I had no chance to use those words in English. However, when I thought deeply, I have never thought and discussed those kind of issue even in Korean. My own thought was not organized well for that issue, so I couldn’t answer for that properly.
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In the middle of the talking, you asked me about the relations between government and private sectors in Korea.
I thought why I could not answer that question properly. At the first,I thought that was because I was not familiar with the political terms and I had no chance to use those words in English. However, when I thought about it deeply, I have never thought and discussed those kinds of issue even in Korean. My own thought was not organized well for that issue, so I couldn’t answer that properly.

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Hi James,

You've done pretty well discussing the issue today. As a matter of fact, you've shared sufficient details.

Your thoughts about the lesson only show that the topics we had and will be having will be helpful not only in stimulating and enhancing your critical thinking, but also in helping you practice all the vocabulary words you know. Furthermore, learn new ones as well.

Thank you for your time. Talk to you again soon.

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