Help me...^^
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Police officers in south korea wear uniforms.
They wear white-shirt, navy ties, and navy pants
Also, they wear hats.
Their main role is to provide a safe environment against crime and accident.
Police cars are white and blue with the police symbol marked on the side. So everybody can easily
When i was little, i used to live in a single-family house.
There were other house, a little playground, and a supermarket.
Everything was so close by and everything was small, unlike these days.
Now the house have become apartment buildings, the little
playground has become a central park, and the supermarket has
become a giant shopping center.
I live in an apartment and it is convenient but sometimes i miss
my old house and the neighborhood.
They wear white-shirt, navy ties, and navy pants
Also, they wear hats.
Their main role is to provide a safe environment against crime and accident.
Police cars are white and blue with the police symbol marked on the side. So everybody can easily
When i was little, i used to live in a single-family house.
There were other house, a little playground, and a supermarket.
Everything was so close by and everything was small, unlike these days.
Now the house have become apartment buildings, the little
playground has become a central park, and the supermarket has
become a giant shopping center.
I live in an apartment and it is convenient but sometimes i miss
my old house and the neighborhood.
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