Monday, November 21th,, 2022 fine
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I went to celerbrate my brother in law’ birthday with my family on Saturday.
We already prepared to hand-writing letter, gifts and tasty cake. We had a great cuisine my mom and my wife made in dinner. After dinner, we light a candle on cake and sang a birthday song to him. Then, he was very satisfied with a big smile. Lastly, my lovely daughter went to kiss on his cheek.
We already prepared to hand-writing letter, gifts and tasty cake. We had a great cuisine my mom and my wife made in dinner. After dinner, we light a candle on cake and sang a birthday song to him. Then, he was very satisfied with a big smile. Lastly, my lovely daughter went to kiss on his cheek.
튜터 교정 답변
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