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작성자: 1102044240 담당 튜터: Julie
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I'm a regular at the korean restaurant called '경원' near my company.
I like this restaurant, so much because it server organic food
I really appreciate it's fresh and delicious dishes.
I visit this place almost twice a week, mostly ant lunch time.
It lunch set menu is a big hit, also the restaurant owner is really generous.


I love cooking. I like to cook Kimchi fried rice for my children on Sunday.
Actually, i bad at cooking. But i would like to cook for my children and my wife about once a week at least.
they loves my Kimchi fried rice. It is easy to cook and delicious.
Some of the basic ingredients you need are some egg, meet and kimchi use them raw or toss them into stir fry.
Kimchi fried rice is typical of spicy and hot food in korea.
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I'm a regular customer at the Korean restaurant called '경원' near my company. I like this restaurant so much because it serves organic food. I really appreciate its fresh and delicious dishes. I visit this place almost twice a week, mostly at lunch time. It's lunch set menu is a big hit. Also, the restaurant owner is really generous.

I love cooking. I like to cook Kimchi fried rice for my children on Sunday. Actually, I'm not good at cooking. But I would like to cook for my children and my wife about once a week at least. They love my Kimchi fried rice. It is easy to cook and delicious. Some of the basic ingredients  needed are some eggs, meat and kimchi. Use them raw or toss them into stir fry. Kimchi fried rice is a type of spicy and hot food in Korea.

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