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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
When i was a kid, i live in single-family house.
but, now lived in apartment.
We has a good environment and it has a big supermarket, school and park nearby.
So, these days everyone wanna lived in apartment.
When I was a kid, we have four distinct seasons.
Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter.
Unfortunately, the climate has changed now.
So, The Spring and Autumns are disappeared but only Summer and Winter remains.
I like to listen to music.
But, i just listen'
I did not musical instrument.
If i get the chance I'd like to play the Guitar.
but, now lived in apartment.
We has a good environment and it has a big supermarket, school and park nearby.
So, these days everyone wanna lived in apartment.
When I was a kid, we have four distinct seasons.
Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter.
Unfortunately, the climate has changed now.
So, The Spring and Autumns are disappeared but only Summer and Winter remains.
I like to listen to music.
But, i just listen'
I did not musical instrument.
If i get the chance I'd like to play the Guitar.
튜터 교정 답변
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