Hang out with a friend.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I hung out with a friend yesterday.
I wanted to watch a movie in the theater.
(or I wanted to go to the movies.)
Because I hadn’t done that in a while.
(or that I hadn’t done that in a while.)
After that, we didn’t do too much. We just had a dinner at chinese place and talked for a couple of hours.
(or We just had dinner at Chinese place and..)
*I wrote one more sentence with () when I’m not sure which one is better.
I wanted to watch a movie in the theater.
(or I wanted to go to the movies.)
Because I hadn’t done that in a while.
(or that I hadn’t done that in a while.)
After that, we didn’t do too much. We just had a dinner at chinese place and talked for a couple of hours.
(or We just had dinner at Chinese place and..)
*I wrote one more sentence with () when I’m not sure which one is better.
튜터 교정 답변
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