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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 01. 06 조회 6603

Fix the incorrect or unnatural expressions

작성자: ssg1_163093 담당 튜터: JonathanW1usa
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I always thank you for kind comments

I went to the airport early in the morning for my business trip with my boss. There were so many people in the airport. I barely went through the security and barely got on the plane on time. You know, there’s something surprising. I got a phone call from my boss. But I was in the middle of security. So I couldn’t answer it. I called him back after the security. He said he was already on the plane!! I didn’t expect him to get on the plane. The airport was so crowded and confusing. I didn’t think he could get on the plane in advance.
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I always thank you for kind comments =)

I went to the airport early in the morning for my business trip with my boss. There were so many people in the airport. I barely went made it through the security and barely got on the plane on time. You know, there’s was something surprising. I got a phone call from my boss. But I was in the middle of security, . S so I couldn’t answer it. I called him back after the getting through (making it through) security. He said he was already on the plane!! I didn’t expect him to get on the plane. The airport was so crowded and confusing. I didn’t think he could get on the plane in advance.

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