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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 01. 16 조회 6392

Practice making stories of ordinary situations

작성자: ssg1_163093 담당 튜터: JonathanW1usa
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I went out for lunch yesterday.
I went to a rice noodle place that I go to once in a while.
They’re always crowded so I usually like to go there when I can go super earlier.
But this time, I got a chance to go earlier.
I was expecting to see some more people, but it was much more crowded that I expected it would be.
튜터 교정 답변

I went out for lunch yesterday.
I went to a rice noodle place that I go to once in a while.
They’re always crowded so I usually like to go there when I can go super a lot earlier / super early.
But this time, I got a chance to go earlier.
I was expecting to see some more people, but it was much more crowded that than I expected it would be.

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