Having a pet
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I had a dog, named Babie. She came to my home when I was in elementary school. One winter, my father saw her in the street. He thought that she was a missed pet or her owner dumped her. If she stayed at street, she would die frozen. So he picked her up in the street. Next morning, I saw her in the living room after I woke up. I was so surprised. I can’t forget our first meeting. She approached to me calmly when I called her. I wanted to take care of her. My mom rejected. I pestered her to take care of Babie. Finally, she allowed me to look after Babie. She was a very calm dog, so she doesn’t bark when new people come to the house. That’s good because it doesn’t disturb my neighbors. Even she liked new people with handling her tail. I loved Babie because she kept me from feeling lonely. She passed away this Feb because of getting older. I was sad. But I’m happy because she passed away very comfort with sleeping. I miss her. Babie is the best dog that anyone could ask for.
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