My last weekend
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
One of my closed friends came to my house with his family on last weekend.
He has a cute and lovely daughter who is eight years old.
She is two years older than my daughter, So they have similar common interests like playing a dull, coloring a picture.
His family slept in my house at that time.
Two girls were very happy and fun. Nobody wanted to sleep. They went to bed at 2:30 A.M.
Next day, time to say good bye was coming to them.
Right after she was leaving, my daughter cried a bit.
He has a cute and lovely daughter who is eight years old.
She is two years older than my daughter, So they have similar common interests like playing a dull, coloring a picture.
His family slept in my house at that time.
Two girls were very happy and fun. Nobody wanted to sleep. They went to bed at 2:30 A.M.
Next day, time to say good bye was coming to them.
Right after she was leaving, my daughter cried a bit.
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