Today diary

The long holiday from 21st to 24th of January has just finished.
Clamor smart phone alarm woke me up today, early in the morning and I can’t believe that I have to go to the office, so I stayed in the bed. However, I accepted the reality of the situation and head to the bathroom.
When I opened my e-mail box, a pile of work was waiting for me.

Just a few reminders:

When writing a pronoun "I" in a sentence, it should be often capitalized.

Also be mindful of ordinal number just like in the first sentence. 

Thank you for still being active to write a composition, you've been improving, keep going!

Teacher Neiz