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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 01. 27 조회 6917

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작성자: ssg1_163093 담당 튜터: JonathanW1usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
You know what? A new bagel cafe opened right by my place. It’s so cool. It’s a 3 minute drive from my house and it has a huge space so I don’t have to worry about being crowded.

A new machine has installed at the funeral.
It’s so convenient. You can remit money with your credit card so you don’t have to worry about having cash with you.
튜터 교정 답변

You know what? A new bagel cafe opened right by my place. It’s so cool. It’s a 3 minute drive from my house and it has a huge space so I don’t have to worry about being crowded.


A new machine has installed at the funeral.
It’s so convenient. You can remit money with your credit card so you don’t have to worry about having cash with you.

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