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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 02. 01 조회 6601

Hair shop

작성자: ssg1_163093 담당 튜터: JonathanW1usa
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I went to a hair shop yesterday. It was long overdue. So I forgot to have to make an appointment in advance. How stupid! I think I waited there for almost 30 minutes. Normally it takes less than 5 minutes until its beginning. But this time, it took a lot of time. I guess I should remember to make an appointment next time.
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I went to a the hair shop yesterday. It was long overdue. So But this time I forgot to have to make an appointment in advance. How stupid! I think I waited there for almost 30 minutes. Normally it takes less than 5 minutes until its beginning. But this time, it took quite a while a lot of time. I guess I should remember to make an appointment next time.

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