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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 02. 08 조회 5852

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작성자: Tonybin 담당 튜터: Neiz
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My colleagues and I went out to have a lunch at noon today.
We decided to go to bibimbap joint where we regular visit.
But unfortunately, it was closed due to owner’ covid-19 infection, so we didn’t have a choice to visit next to similar the one. After lunch, I was impressed by price and flavor.
This joint is not expensive as other bibimbap’s one.
튜터 교정 답변

My colleagues and I went out to have a lunch at noon today.
We decided to go to a bibimbap joint where we regularly visit.
But unfortunately, it was closed due to owner’s covid-19 infection, so we didn’t have a choice but to visit the next to similar the one. After lunch, I was impressed by price and flavor.
This joint is not expensive as the other bibimbap restaurant.

 

Hi Tony,

Here's the reconstruction of what you've writen to make it clearer to read.

My colleagues and I went out to have lunch at noon today.
We decided to go to a bibimbap joint where we regularly visit.
But unfortunately, it was closed due to owner’s covid-19 infection, so we didn’t have a choice but to visit the next similar one. After lunch, I was impressed by price and flavor.
This joint is not expensive as the other bibimbap restaurant.

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