Business Trip
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Business trips
Actually I am going for solving the problem of product.
We made the new technology product, but, the one have problems because the term made is short.
Then I think that new product is birthed having destiny normally.
But we will go to step by step with our products, solving some problems.
Then I believe that we'll meet the perfect product.
Actually I am going for solving the problem of product.
We made the new technology product, but, the one have problems because the term made is short.
Then I think that new product is birthed having destiny normally.
But we will go to step by step with our products, solving some problems.
Then I believe that we'll meet the perfect product.
튜터 교정 답변
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