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I share yesterday topic post

작성자: kolon_202100991 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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Hi lucky

I share the instagram url which is yesterday topic
I will explain the post, so can you correct it

https://www.instagram.com/p/CqIXAF-yND2/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y%3D

the second page is when I met a zebra in front of my house, I make a u-turn very natually. lol
the third page video was surprised to find a runaway zebra on the road. but the reason why they was really surprised is because zebra is very handsome
the 6 page picture description : is there a zebra on the streat like a streat cat in korea?
the 7 to 10 page is a picture of a zebra running away from a nearby zoo

HAND lucky
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Hi lucky

I share the instagram url which is yesterday topic  ...WHICH WAS YESTERDAY'S TOPIC
I will explain the post, so can you correct it  EXCELLENT ENGLISH

https://www.instagram.com/p/CqIXAF-yND2/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y%3D

the second page is when I met a zebra in front of my house, I make a u-turn very natually. lol  EXCELLENT ENGLISH - AND HA HA HA, THE MAN TURNED AROUND SO QUICKLY THAT I LAUGHED OUT LOUD WHEN I SAW IT.

the third page video was surprised to find a runaway zebra on the road. but the reason why they was really surprised is because zebra is very handsome    I AM NOT CERTAIN THAT YOU CAN LINK THE FEELING OF SURPRISE WITH HOW HANDSOME THE ZRBRA IS.  I WOULD BE SURPRISED EVEN IF AN UGLY ZEBRA WAS RUNNING WITH THE TRAFFIC IN THE STREET!  LOL   THE REASON THAT i WAS REALLY SURPRISED IS BECAUSE "THE" ZEBRA IS VERY HANDSOME.  YOU MUST USE AN ARTICLE (A, AN, OR THE) IN FRONT OF A SINGULAR NOUN LIKE ZEBRA.

the 6 page picture description : is there a zebra on the streat like a streat cat in korea?  VERY FUNNY COMMENT - CATS ACTUALLY CAN HAVE STRIPES, BUT NOT BLACK AND WHITE.  LOL

the 7 to 10 page is a picture of a zebra running away from a nearby zoo  EXCELLENT ENGLISH.       I ENJOYED THESE PHOTOS AND THE VIDEO VERY MUCH,  THANK YOU FOR SHARING THEM WITH ME - IT HAS MADE MY FRIDAY START OF HAPPILY!

HAND lucky

Dongwan, , I have opened your message, but right now I have to prepare for today's classes.  When my school day is finished, I will fully rreply to your message.  Thank you for sending this...I am excited to look at it and respond to you.  Enjoy your day!  Lucky

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