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I made a sentence with a new word yesterday.

작성자: jds0051 담당 튜터: Love
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
How are you?

I heard the word "fountain of youth" for the first time.
I used to be lost in thought in search of a dream.
Many renewed are being made these days.
Many people longevity these days.
I think it hurts achy by little as I get older.
I hate breaky snacks.
You behaved this way back days?
Have you ever been overwhelmed?
I'm stressed out because of customer.

Have a good day.
튜터 교정 답변

How are you?

I heard the word "fountain of youth" for the first time. yes
I used to be lost in thought in search of a dream. yes
Many products are being renewed these days. [Renewed (verb) means to begin doing something again / (adjective) having been resumed, re-established, or revived.]
Many people aim for longevity these days. [Longetivity is a noun that means long life or long existence]
I think it is achy. / It's hurting more and more as I get older.  [Achy (adjective) means painful]
I hate breakable snacks. [Breaky is a slang and is used for informal dialogues or conversations.]
Did you behave this way back in the day?
Have you ever been overwhelmed? yes
I'm stressed out because of my customer.

Have a good day.

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