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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 03. 30 조회 5190

Making a sentences using expressions from the previous class

작성자: Tonybin 담당 튜터: Neiz
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I went out along with my mother yesterday.
I haven’t spent time with her for a long time because I had a excuse for a busy. She was excited to go out with me. We enjoyed fabulous dinner and I promised her to the following gathering.
튜터 교정 답변

I went out along with my mother yesterday.
I haven’t spent time with her for a long time because I had an excuse that I've been busy. She was excited to go out with me. We enjoyed a fabulous dinner and I promised her that we would eat out again.

 

 

Hi Tony,

Thank you for this. I read and made some changes to simplify the statement and highligted some words and phrases that should be included in this writing. You may review yours and the one I changed. Overall, it was just a few and I'm sure it would improve.

 

Teacher Neiz

 

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