Making sentences using expressions I learned from the previous class

I called Mr. Choi in Education Consult yesterday. One of my colleagues received it instead because he was out of the office at that time. Fortunately, there was a substitute for his work, so she put me through to an employee and the employee said "I would be happy to give you an updated information". He brought me up to speed.

Hi Tony,

     Here are some corrections I changed and highlighted them so that you could identify again which are some corrections I replaced. Great job having an initiative to use the expressions from the previous topic. Keep going!

Teacher Neiz