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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 04. 07 조회 5862

Making sentences using the expressions I learned in last class

작성자: Tonybin 담당 튜터: Neiz
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I was asked to take a leader of new project from the team leader, so I accepted it and have prepared.
Also, I had to do presentation to representatives. I think I am a good public speaker but The day before the presentation I was going back and forth in the room due to the anxiety. Nevertheless, I finalized it successfully at the day. After that, I felt confident. It has been running smoothly since the project started.
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I was asked to take the lead on this new project from the team leader, so I accepted it and have prepared.
Also, I had to do a presentation to representatives. I think I am a good public speaker but the day before the presentation, I went back and forth in the room due to the anxiety. Nevertheless, I finalized it successfully on the day. After that, I felt confident. It has been running smoothly since the project started.

> I was asked to take the lead on this new project from the team leader, so I accepted it and prepared. Also, I had to do a presentation to representatives. I think I am a good public speaker but the day before the presentation, I went back and forth in the room due to anxiety. Nevertheless, I finalized it successfully on the day. After that, I felt confident. It has been running smoothly since the project started.

 

Hi Tony,

Thanks for applying the expressions we just discussed fro, our previous lesson. I made some corrections and re-write to make my corrections clearer. When composing a paragraph or a sentence, always be mindful of letters by writing appriopriately if it should be in capital letters or not. Also, punctuation marks should be properly observed and applied accordingly. But all in all, few grammar errors were noticed that can be improved. Keep doing your best!

 

Teacher Neiz

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