"In my case, most of working times, I have been in company in Project. So it has been very short time to work in headquater. I finished Vietnam Project a month ago, I came back to Jamsil main building of our company. These days I have many free time during daytime on weekdays. I am attending on-line class, Gathering Class and English Phone Class, etc. And I meet my previous co-workers in company Cafe. But I started to try to read managers mind. I hope that these time continue, but I have to prepare for next project to enter."
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In my case, most of working times, I have been in company in Project. So it has been very short time to work in headquater. I finished Vietnam Project a month ago, I came back to Jamsil main building of our company. These days I have many free time during daytime on weekdays. I am attending on-line class, Gathering Class and English Phone Class, etc. And I meet my previous co-workers in company Cafe. But I started to try to read managers mind. I hope that these time continue, but I have to prepare for next project to enter.
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Most of the time, I am on a business trip to do some projects so I only stay in our head office for a short time. Actually, I just finished our project in Vietnam a month ago. These days I have many free time during daytime on weekdays. I attend online class, gathering class, English phone class, etc. I meet my previous co-workers in our company cafe and start to read my manager's mind. I hope to spend more time with them, but I already have to prepare for my upcoming projects.
Note:
blue - better expressions
red - spelling, punctuation & capitalization
green - sentence construction
yellow - preposition
pink - verb tenses
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Hi Mr. Won,
I was impressed on how you express your thoughts with your composition today. However, there are still a lot of things to improve. I know that you can do better next time because you are such a hardworking student. Remember to take note of my corrections all the time. Remember the proper usage of your punctuations and capitalization when you write. Keep practicing. Have a wonderful day!
Love,
Teacher Angel
"Good, better, best. Never let it rest, 'till your good is better and your better is best!"
