Making sentences using the expressions I learned last class.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
We bid a farewell to her who decided to leave the company last month. She said the reason she leave is that she want to focus on looking after a baby and is going to be ready to have a another one and added there will keep on a journey to have a baby.
She loves a baby so much, so she want to have many babies.
We grabbed a bite lunch together, and all proposed a toast to her with juice at the end of the lunch.
She loves a baby so much, so she want to have many babies.
We grabbed a bite lunch together, and all proposed a toast to her with juice at the end of the lunch.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!