목록으로 돌아가기
공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 05. 25 조회 5592

A diary on Hump day

작성자: Tonybin 담당 튜터: Neiz
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I guess It's the first time to keep a diary on Hump day.
I perhaps think it's the toughest day of the week for me. By the way, I have a surprise news about my English level.
I usually check out my feedback teacher gave me after class. I read it as usual yesterday. But, there was super big changed my English level. Pronunciation and vocabulary are scoring up each of 2points. It hasn't changed for several months, so It made me happy and motivated. I have keep studying English since May of 2022. After effort and focus, my dedication to study English paid off a bit.
튜터 교정 답변

I guess it's the first time to keep a diary on a Hump day.
I perhaps think Perhaps, it's the toughest day of the week for me. By the way, I have a surprise news about my English level. I usually check out my feedback that teacher gives me after the class. I read it as usual yesterday. But, there was a super big huge change in my English level. Pronunciation and vocabulary are scoring up each of 2points scores increased about 2 points. It hasn't changed for several months, so it made me happy and motivated. I have kept on studying English since May of 2022. After all of my effort and focus, my dedication to study English paid off a bit.

 

REVISED:

I guess it's the first time to keep a diary on a Hump day. Perhaps, it's the toughest day of the week for me. By the way, I have a surprise news about my English level. I usually check out my feedback that teacher gives after the class. I read it as usual yesterday. But, there was a huge change in my English level. Pronunciation and vocabulary scores increased about 2 points. It hasn't changed for several months, so it made me happy and motivated. I have kept on studying English since May of 2022. After all of my effort and focus, my dedication to study English paid off a bit.

교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!