Shopping
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Many people like to shop but I don’t enjoy shopping. Because shopping makes me tired. I have to walk around the department store to find something like shoes or clothes. Also I need to check the price what is more cheap. It is boring. My mom usually buy something for me. She works at a department store. Therefore, she can buy something cheap price. I don’t need to care about bargain sales. I just choose whether I will take it, or not. She have a good sense about choosing stuff. So I mostly agree. Instead of not shopping, I spend my money to buy books. I’m happy when I see my book shelves with many books. I like reading a book. I often buy books through Internet site. After paying, the site gives me some points that I can use when I want to buy books. Also it gives me some discounts. If I order books before 11 AM, I can mostly take the books until that night. The delivery fee is free! It is very comfortable and advantageous.
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