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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 07. 03 조회 5180

Introducing myself

작성자: eduwill02 담당 튜터: Sarah2
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Hello my name is SUNG chaeun. I'm 23 years old and now i'm on duty for military service. My release day is 9/7. I have been U.S.A and studied for 6 months at elementary school. At the first time, talking to different country's people is very very hard, but I got used to that and now i'm not afraid of talking foreigner. In this class, I'm looking forward to talking sentence more fluently and precisely
Thank you!!????
튜터 교정 답변

Hello my name is SUNG chaeun. I'm 23 years old. i am serving in the army for my military service. My release day is 9/7. I have been to the U.S.A and studied for 6 months at an elementary school. At  first, talking to people around the world was difficult , but I got used to that and now i'm not afraid of talking to anyone anywhere!.  I'm looking forward to workinbg with you and  improving my sentences  to become more fluent.
Thank you!!

 

FANTASTIC CHAEUN!

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