My thought about the topic I learned in last class

I studied all about sake with my English teacher yesterday. Sake is a traditional Japanese drink made from fermented rice in a long time ago. I drink it with my colleagues sometimes. There are some kinds of Sake. It's fun to choose the one for us. It made me reminds me of makgeolli which is a tradional Korean drink made from fermented rice. It's similar to Sake, but not same not exactly the same. I think makgeolli is sweeter and healthier than sake.

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I studied all about sake with my English teacher yesterday. Sake is a traditional Japanese drink made from fermented rice a long time ago. I drink it with my colleagues sometimes. There are some kinds of Sake. It's fun to choose the one for us. It reminds me of makgeolli which is a tradional Korean drink made from fermented rice. It's similar to Sake, but not exactly the same. I think makgeolli is sweeter and healthier than sake.

Hi Tony,

It's great that you were able to get back again to make a composition about the class. Particularly this topic about Sake. As you can see, I made a few corrections to make the sentences more vivid and simpler to convey exactly what you wanted to express. Thanks for this!

Teacher Neiz