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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Here Dhaka is raining now.
I heard that this season is rainy day but it's been a long time since I saw it rain.
It's good thing to us that it rains for the fresh air, ther are also inconveniences like traffic jam.
The road condition is not good when it rains, cause there are no traffic signal in here so many traffic congestion occurs.
Maybe tomorrow will not rain and hope that there are no traffic congestion in Gulshan area.
I heard that this season is rainy day but it's been a long time since I saw it rain.
It's good thing to us that it rains for the fresh air, ther are also inconveniences like traffic jam.
The road condition is not good when it rains, cause there are no traffic signal in here so many traffic congestion occurs.
Maybe tomorrow will not rain and hope that there are no traffic congestion in Gulshan area.
튜터 교정 답변
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