Making sentences using expressions I learned from the previous class
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I studied topic about 'single-use plastic in last class.
Single-use plastic is a big issue in the world and amount of it has been soared fast since in 2010.
We usually use it every single day unconsciously. Also, Many sorts of plastic are everywhere in our life like plastic cup, bag, container, cutlery etc.
We must cut down amount of plastic right away and find out great the way to reduce plastic in our life.
Both the government and people are doing something. The government make a ban regulation against plastic.
We can use substitude good instead of plastic.
Single-use plastic is a big issue in the world and amount of it has been soared fast since in 2010.
We usually use it every single day unconsciously. Also, Many sorts of plastic are everywhere in our life like plastic cup, bag, container, cutlery etc.
We must cut down amount of plastic right away and find out great the way to reduce plastic in our life.
Both the government and people are doing something. The government make a ban regulation against plastic.
We can use substitude good instead of plastic.
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