A diary on Tuesday

Although It became it's fall already, it's still too very muggy outside. I think It should be it's because of the climate change in the world. It's very cool and windy outside in the past at that time. bad sign Warning signs has appeared occured all over the world like the temperature is increasing, glacier melts and sea level rises. I'm have a worried about the climate in the future. It's time to solve those issues together sooner rather than later.

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Although it's fall already, it's still too muggy outside. I think it's because of the climate change in the world. It's very cool and windy outside in the past. Warning signs has occured all over the world like the temperature is increasing, glacier melts and sea level rises. I'm worried about the climate in the future. It's time to solve those issues together sooner rather than later.

Hi Tony,

Well done for another composition. I made corrections here that you may continue to practice.  Prepositions, articles and proper punctuations should always be improved. Therefore, not only through communication, but also when making a composition should be improved to enhance your skills. Keep on going!

Teacher Neiz