A diary on Tuesday
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I studied about veganism with my teacher yesterday. To prepare for the class, I searched for internet articles.
There was something interesting for me. The news is that Seoul government promoted veganism to fight climate crisis.
They had a plan to disseminate what veganism means and why many people should adapt to it.
As the majority of the public are still unfamiliar with it.
I think I join with it right away, I would do that in the future for the environment
It's time to think of that deeply
There was something interesting for me. The news is that Seoul government promoted veganism to fight climate crisis.
They had a plan to disseminate what veganism means and why many people should adapt to it.
As the majority of the public are still unfamiliar with it.
I think I join with it right away, I would do that in the future for the environment
It's time to think of that deeply
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