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Hi Beth, I request confirmation whether there is wrong sentence , please

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Hi~ Beth.

I request confirmation whether there is wrong sentence , please

I think that you are very kindly english teacher

I met you, I'm lucky person ^^


How are you this morning ?

Today , You are voice very good

Yesterday Thank you for sending me message.

I don’t know composition correction tab , Thank you for letting me know

Are you a good English teacher


Today is Wednesday.

The most tiring day of the week is Wednesday.


thease days, I do not know the song.

I like Korean pop old music, and old country pop song

My favorite song is "you are not alone" by Michael Jackson

It’s my favorite for it is very touching

Listening to this song, makes me feel better

This song means a lot to me because it helped

Listening to this song made me feel better
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-> Hi Beth,

-> I want to request for confirmation whether there is wrong error in the sentences , please. I think that you are a very kindly English teacher. I met you, I'm a lucky person. ^^

-> How are you this morning? Today, You are Your voice was very good. Yesterday, thank you for sending me a message.

-> I don’t didn't know about the composition correction tab, thank you for letting me know. Are you a good English teacher

Today is Wednesday. The most tiring day of the week is Wednesday.

-> thease These days, I do not know the any song.

-> I like old Korean pop old music, and old country pop songs. My favorite song is, "You are not alone" by Michael Jackson. It’s my favorite for it is very touching.

-> Listening to this song makes me feel better. This song means a lot to me. because it helped Listening to this song made helps me feel better.

 

Hello David,

Thank you for sending me this composition and for acknowledging my skills in teaching.

Thank you for sharing again your favorite song and artist. I think, I'm starting to like Michael Jackson's song too.

Let's study again, okay? Take care.

 

-Beth- smiley

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