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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 10. 06 조회 4356

I made a sentence with a new word yesterday.

작성자: jds0051 담당 튜터: Blessy
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Hi,Teacher.
I support his opinion.
I support and respect his opinion.
He was a passionate fan.
I am a passionate of Byung-hun Lee.
He was famous for being passionate person.
Shin Yu-bin.player is impressed the audience with her tireless effort.
Even when the game was over , fans cheered loudly for Shin Yu-bin.

Have a good day^^~
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Hi,Teacher.
I support his opinion.
I support and respect his opinion.
He was a passionate actor.
I am a passionate fan of Byung-hun Lee.
He was famous for being a passionate person.
Shin Yu-bin, a table tennis player, impressed the audience with her tireless effort.
Even when the game was over , fans cheered loudly for Shin Yu-bin.

Have a good day^^~

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