This is the sentence I made yesterday.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Good morning. teacher
When i come home after work i usually have to cook. And i cook rice and boil some soup. I don't clean the floor because the floor is cleaned by a robot vacuum cleaner. When i cook rice. I use an electric rice cooker and use a gas stove to make soup. If i don't cook , my family will starve. And if the robot vacuum cleaner doesn't clean the floor, it will probably becomes messy. I do my chores almost everyday when i get home from work.but i don't my chores sometimes.(but i sometimes don't do my chores.) I don't want to do anything If i get off work late.
Have a nice day.
When i come home after work i usually have to cook. And i cook rice and boil some soup. I don't clean the floor because the floor is cleaned by a robot vacuum cleaner. When i cook rice. I use an electric rice cooker and use a gas stove to make soup. If i don't cook , my family will starve. And if the robot vacuum cleaner doesn't clean the floor, it will probably becomes messy. I do my chores almost everyday when i get home from work.but i don't my chores sometimes.(but i sometimes don't do my chores.) I don't want to do anything If i get off work late.
Have a nice day.
튜터 교정 답변
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