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공개 첨삭 완료 2023. 10. 11 조회 4246

The job I want to be

작성자: ds040155 담당 튜터: 필리핀 강사선택
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
before i got married i was really into yoga some time. i thought it would be a nice to be a yoga instructor because i could make the mony and stay in good shape. so i looked into becoming of a yoga instructor but the time and costs for it were too much more than i thought. at that time i had t o make money so i just kept it only in my dream. maybe i was scared about challenging. one thing leads to another. i've just kept doing this job so far and i think i've came here too much far to be a yoga instructor.
튜터 교정 답변

Before I got married I was really into yoga for some time. I thought it would be nice to be a yoga instructor because I could make money and stay in good shape.  I looked into becoming a yoga instructor, but the time and cost for it were much more than I  thought. At that time, I  had to make money, so I  just kept it only in my dream. Maybe I  was scared of challenges. One thing leads to another. I 've just kept doing this job so far and I  think I've come here too far to be a yoga instructor.

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