A diary on last saturday
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
It was our 6th wedding anniversary on last Saturday.
We talked about our plan which we will do like activities at that time.
There are always two things we do together every single year. First, we take a picture by ourself without a photographer.
We think we keep a record and remember how old we are getting.
Secondly, we visit fancy and unique restaurants as it's pretty special day.
We talked about our plan which we will do like activities at that time.
There are always two things we do together every single year. First, we take a picture by ourself without a photographer.
We think we keep a record and remember how old we are getting.
Secondly, we visit fancy and unique restaurants as it's pretty special day.
튜터 교정 답변
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